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    As healthcare consumers, we must actively plan to protect ourselves, our family members, and loved ones.

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    0  Views: 924 Answers: 1 Posted: 12 years ago
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      Hi, yes the structure is fairly good.


      Personally I would insert "our' before 


      loved ones, just keep the "flow" going,


      plus I'd lose the comma after "and' but


      that's just me.


      As healthcare consumers, we must actively plan to protect ourselves, our family members and our loved ones.


       

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